My Digipack update

This is my initial idea, the feedback I got for it was that it was a very creative idea but it would suit a much more established artist. One of the criticisms was that it was hard to make out the artists face, and since this is the debut album that would be a bad thing because the artist needs to be instantly recognised.
I will need to fix my album cover idea to fix this and I need to keep in mind that the artist must be recognisable.