reflecting back on AS video remake

http://summerworkprojects12.blogspot.co.uk/2012/06/as-set-5-rm-and-tf.html
Here is the link to the music video we had remake back in June. Me and my group remade Peter Kay's music video of "Is this the way to Amarillo."
3 technical strengths of this video were that

• It uses most of the camera shot types used in the actual music video.
• The camera is moving a decent pace so it isnt too fast or too slow.
• The video is fairly accurate. 

3 weaknesses of the video were that

• Not enough close ups were used when I was walking down the hall as in the real music video, it features close ups of everyone walking with him. 
• The lip syncing is quite of because I wasn't miming very well.
• We only used 2 base tracks. 

 I had learned how much effort needs to be put into making a good music video from this experience.